........................................................................................................12 Kanon Street
........................................................................................................Tel-Aviv
........................................................................................................April 29, 2010
Principal(מיותר)
Harvard University
Cambridge, MA 02138
Massachusetts Hall
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am 23 years old, living in Tel-Aviv, and I understand you have an excellent course in art and photography, that will begin in 3 months. I wish to apply for your course because I find these fields very interesting and attractive and I know your University has the highest grades in America.
I wish to study for my MA and I was extremly disappointed to find out that the art and photography courses offered by the universities in Israel are pretty lame. However, because of my appriciation to those fields I decided not to give up, and try to apply for your course.
In addition, I believe I am able to study at your university. My grades are very high and I got three excellence certificates in high school, Moreover, my degree's project was the best in the class and I was the youngest student between all the students(מיותר) in my class. If you give me the chance to take part in your course, I will not let you down and I will prove (to) you I can get very high grades despite of(מיותר) my age.
I would be grateful if you could send me more information about the course and an application form with it.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Truly yours,
Marco Pollo
Great! I like it.
(94)
Daphna
Thursday, April 29, 2010
Thursday, April 22, 2010
An Organized Trip
..............................................................................................6 Lahav Street
..............................................................................................Holon
..............................................................................................April 22, 2010
Manger
"See the World" Travel Agancy
85 Salamandra Street
New York
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am (a) 22 years old woman and I have heard your agancy is very successful. I would like you to orgnize(sp.) a trip which I would take part in. I am interested in art and history of(phr. - historical) places. I have had some travels(phr. - I have traveled before ...) in Europe and I was fascinated from(ww. - by) the views I saw and the ancient places I visit(gr.).
I would like to see some landscapes and have picnics in the(מיותר) nature. In addition, I would like to visit some art and history museums. I wish to visit in Spain and visit the Gaudi's Museum and have some time in Gaudi's Park. Moreover, Barcelona is known for it's beauty and there are a lot of amazing places where the trip can be(phr.) - Didn't you read the instructions I gave properly? You were supposed to ask for information for an organized trip in the USA..
Concidering(ww. - Since) museums are expensive, I would like you to check for(מיותר) the price and try the best to make it(phr.) as low as you can. In addition, I would like you to look for esteemed hotels but also, (that are) not very expensive. The last thing I would like to ask you is to check places that have restaurants near them, and more important(ly), which plane will we take and what cost will it be(phr. - I need to know the flight arrangements and costs).
I look forward to this trip and I hope to get your reply, with the information I asked you(ww. - for), soon.
Truly yours,
Marco Pollo.
(75)
Daphna
..............................................................................................Holon
..............................................................................................April 22, 2010
Manger
"See the World" Travel Agancy
85 Salamandra Street
New York
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am (a) 22 years old woman and I have heard your agancy is very successful. I would like you to orgnize(sp.) a trip which I would take part in. I am interested in art and history of(phr. - historical) places. I have had some travels(phr. - I have traveled before ...) in Europe and I was fascinated from(ww. - by) the views I saw and the ancient places I visit(gr.).
I would like to see some landscapes and have picnics in the(מיותר) nature. In addition, I would like to visit some art and history museums. I wish to visit in Spain and visit the Gaudi's Museum and have some time in Gaudi's Park. Moreover, Barcelona is known for it's beauty and there are a lot of amazing places where the trip can be(phr.) - Didn't you read the instructions I gave properly? You were supposed to ask for information for an organized trip in the USA..
Concidering(ww. - Since) museums are expensive, I would like you to check for(מיותר) the price and try the best to make it(phr.) as low as you can. In addition, I would like you to look for esteemed hotels but also, (that are) not very expensive. The last thing I would like to ask you is to check places that have restaurants near them, and more important(ly), which plane will we take and what cost will it be(phr. - I need to know the flight arrangements and costs).
I look forward to this trip and I hope to get your reply, with the information I asked you(ww. - for), soon.
Truly yours,
Marco Pollo.
(75)
Daphna
Thursday, April 8, 2010
A New Radio Show
13 Yehood St.
Holon
March 29, 2010
Manager
Local Radio Station
18 Echad Bemay Street,
Holon
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Reut and I am 16 years old. I am writing to you because I have heard that you are planning to produce a new one-hour show dedicated just for teenagers in our city's radio station. I believe this kind of show is very important and interesting, but it has to be done right. I have some tips for you, so your show will be best for all; for you, and for us, the teenagers of Holon.
I believe the new program should mostly focus on what teenagers really like; music, movies, television, youth movements and places to hang out. In your show, you should play successful charting(phr.) songs that teenagers like, recommend on(מיותר) new television programs and movies, and suggest the bored teenagers places to hang out or maybe youth movements they can join.
I believe you should focus on these subjects on the program because I believe that when the students are turning(gr. - turn) on the radio, they don't want to hear about politics nor studying. They want to listen to a program about things they like, that will clean their heads, make them calmer and in the end – happier. It will give them their daily hour of happiness in their everyday life.
To conclude, if you want a(an) honorable rating peak(ww.), you should make(ww.- dedicate) the program on(ww. - to) things that teenagers like. No teenager will listen (to) the radio for hearing(phr.) adults talking about studying and coping with social pressure.
Thank you for reading my letter.
Yours truly,
Yarden Shalom.
(88)
Daphna
Holon
March 29, 2010
Manager
Local Radio Station
18 Echad Bemay Street,
Holon
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Reut and I am 16 years old. I am writing to you because I have heard that you are planning to produce a new one-hour show dedicated just for teenagers in our city's radio station. I believe this kind of show is very important and interesting, but it has to be done right. I have some tips for you, so your show will be best for all; for you, and for us, the teenagers of Holon.
I believe the new program should mostly focus on what teenagers really like; music, movies, television, youth movements and places to hang out. In your show, you should play successful charting(phr.) songs that teenagers like, recommend on(מיותר) new television programs and movies, and suggest the bored teenagers places to hang out or maybe youth movements they can join.
I believe you should focus on these subjects on the program because I believe that when the students are turning(gr. - turn) on the radio, they don't want to hear about politics nor studying. They want to listen to a program about things they like, that will clean their heads, make them calmer and in the end – happier. It will give them their daily hour of happiness in their everyday life.
To conclude, if you want a(an) honorable rating peak(ww.), you should make(ww.- dedicate) the program on(ww. - to) things that teenagers like. No teenager will listen (to) the radio for hearing(phr.) adults talking about studying and coping with social pressure.
Thank you for reading my letter.
Yours truly,
Yarden Shalom.
(88)
Daphna
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